Showing posts with label Week 9. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Week 9. Show all posts

Friday, April 15, 2016

Storytelling Week 9: The Dating Game Part 2

“Now that you all have heard the rules we will begin our questions with our first contestant, Mike. Once Mike answers the question Alex will go, then Will, Josh, and finally Sam,” Ryan explained.

“Is everyone ready?!” Ryan exclaimed.

The crowd cheered. Ava could hardly sit still in the love seat.

“Then let us begin the game! The first question is: what is your best quality?” Ryan started.

Mike spoke up. “My best quality would have to be my work ethic. I grew up on a ranch out in the country and learned what it means to take care of myself and of my family.”

Alex went next. “That would be my humor. I love making others around me laugh. After all, laughter is the best medicine for anything!”

“Those qualities are cute, boys. I believe mine would be my charming good looks. Hear that, Ava?” Will boasted.

Ava rolled her eyes and the crowd cheered and hollered. Apparently he wasn’t lying.

Josh started when the crowd died down. “Mine would be my patience. I have learned that the best things come to those who wait.”

Sam went last. “I’d say my honesty. You see, I am rather blunt and I don’t like to talk much.”

Ryan cautioned Sam. “That might not always be a good thing, Sam! Now on to our next question. What is your idea of a romantic date?”

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Ava stared at her sheet of names. The game had come to an end and it was time for her to make a choice. She could hear the intercession and rustle of the audience in the background and tried to focus. Mike was a hard-working cowboy. He had grown up on a ranch where he had acquired his work ethic. He had a deep voice that Ava loved. Alex was hilarious. Every time he spoke Ava ended up laughing at his corny jokes. Will was just annoying and was way too cocky for her. Ava felt like if they went on a date it would be all about him. Josh was a kind-hearted man. He was always so genuine and gave his heart to the questions, unlike some others. Sam had a funny dry humor. He wasn’t kidding when he said he was blunt. His answers were straight to the point. Ava thought about each and after a while had finally came to a decision.

“Ryan, I have made my decision,” Ava said.

“Everyone,” Ryan announced, “Ava has chosen a winner! Can I have a drum roll please?”

A boom of thunder came from the crowd as they started the drum roll.

“My choice is...Mike!” Ava declared.

The crowd burst into applaud and cheered at her choice. Mike then stood up and walked out from behind the curtain. He was a good-looking man. He had short blonde hair and baby blue eyes. He was wearing a red plaid shirt with dark blue jeans and cowboy boots. He was in very good shape and his smile was breathtaking.

Ava smiled to herself  because he was perfect. Who knew she would find this gem on a dating show?
          


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While Frank's parents were sleeping, Frank snuck into their closet and found the family safe. After a few minutes he was able to unlock the safe. Frank smiled. "More than enough money to get me to New York."

Author's Note:

The previous two stories in my portfolio are about Frank and Ava. The latest was “The Dating Game” which featured Ava on a dating show with five contestants. This story is a continuation of “The Dating Game.” In the Indian Epic, Narayan's Mahabharata, the character of Draupadi finds herself in a swayamvara contest and the winner would have Draupadi as his wife. Arjuna ends up winning the swayamvara contest because he was able to shoot the fish in the eye. After taking Draupadi to their mother, Kunti, she mistakenly told the Pandavas to share what they had brought, not knowing it was a bride. Thus the Pandavas had to share Draupadi and she had to marry all five. In my story, winning the contest is only done by answering the questions the best. In Ava's mind that was Mike.


There were two reasons I chose to do a game show to represent Draupadi’s situation. The first is show Draupadi having five husbands through the five contestants. The second is to represent the swayamvara in a modern-day setting. A swayamvara was a practice in India of choosing a husband from a list of different suitors by a woman. Having the swayamvara be shown as a dating game was the best way I thought to represent it. There was an actual show in the late 60’s called “The Dating Game” which was played exactly like I had it in my story. The only difference was that in the TV show there were three contestants instead of five.


Thursday, March 24, 2016

Reading Disary Week 9: The Brook

This week is read part B of the Brook. It is amazing how detailed these movies are. Before this week I was confused about what sections I had gotten two but we read the Mahabharata in a week and now this movie version is a two week process. Its like watching Lord of the Rings in a different genre. The two week period doesn't bother me and neither does the cheesiness of the film. This is because it is really easy to watch it at the end of the night in bed. I am still slowly piecing together the story but I am not sure I like it as much as the Ramanyana.


The Brook byYoutube

Tuesday, March 22, 2016

Reading Diary Week 9: A New Epic

  


This week I am watch a video version of the Mahabharata called the the Brook. One of the big differences about this video version is that it is real characters. I have thought that the other videos I watch were had to follow or a bit annoying. This version is still a little cheesy I will admit, but I am use to marvel movies! Even though it is a cheesy movie, I feel I have a better grasp on the story of the Mahabharata. Even with watching most of Epified I caught more of the story but it is more defined watching this version.
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Sunday, March 20, 2016

First Part of Reading: Week 9 Reading Diary Epified




For the extra credit reading for Week 9 I watched Part A of the video version of the Mahabharata that is on Epified TV in india called, The Mahabharata: Karmic Revolution. I know this version of the story doesn't even make it to the dice game but I can understand why very easily. The story telling in this is very slow. I guess that is a a good thing that you get a lot more into the story but it is also taking forever. I must say kudos to the artist who is drawing the whole scene out. I really like the drawings but it seems the will take a while to do. I wonder if they will ever finish them.